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Written Exercise 202 - MY LUNCHBOX In the picture, it was my lunchbox for today. It contained an apple and a Zongzi(Or sticky rice dumpling), which were both about the size of my fist, a small sized boiled egg and a mini sized steamed stuffed bun. I ate all of them apart from the last one ( I mean the mini sized steamed stuffed bun). Not until I had a bite of the Zongzi did I know it was a sweet one. It tasted good and I liked it. I felt stuffing when I had finished the egg, so I had the steamed stuffed bun left. Maybe I will eat it when I am hungry later. Although my lunchbox is not the typical Chinese lunchbox, it consists of carbohydrates, fiber and protein, which all support our bodies and they are like finger food so that it is easy to eat them when you are outdoors.
Jun 25, 2021 8:19 AM
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Written Exercise 202 - MY LUNCHBOX In the picture, you can see my today´s lunchbox. It contained an apple and a Zongzi(Or sticky rice dumpling), which were both about the size of my fist, a small sized boiled egg and a mini sized steamed stuffed bun. I ate all of them except the last one ( I mean the mini sized steamed stuffed bun). Not until I had a bite of the Zongzi did I know it was sweet. It tasted good and I liked it. I felt stuffed when I had finished the egg, so I didn´t eat the steamed stuffed bun. Maybe I will eat it later when I am hungry again. Although my lunchbox is not a typical Chinese lunchbox, it consists of carbohydrates, fiber and protein, all of which support our bodies. They also are like finger food so it is easy to eat them when you are outdoors.
June 25, 2021
Written Exercise 202 - MY LUNCHBOX In the picture, you can see my lunchbox for today (语法正确的但是我们不会这么说). It contained an apple and a Zongzi(Or sticky rice dumpling), which were both about the size of my fist. (Check “run on sentences” grammar) It also had a small boiled egg and a mini steamed stuffed bun. I ate all of them except for (apart from - you physically separated your food, does not make sense here) the mini steamed stuffed bun). It wasn’t until I had a bite of the Zongzi that I knew (it wasn’t until…. that…) it was a sweet one. It tasted good and I liked it. I felt stuffed (adj, stuffing = noun) when I had finished the egg, so I had the steamed (stuffed) bun left over. Maybe I will eat it when I am hungry later. Although my lunchbox is not the typical Chinese lunchbox, it consists of carbohydrates, fiber, and protein, which all support our bodies and they are finger foods so they are easy to eat when you are outdoors.
June 25, 2021
Written Exercise 202 - MY LUNCHBOX In the picture, it was my lunchbox for today. It contained an apple and a Zongzi(Or sticky rice dumpling), which were both about the size of my fist, a small sized boiled egg and a mini sized steamed stuffed bun. I ate all of them apart from the last one ( I mean the mini sized steamed stuffed bun). Not until I had a bite of the Zongzi did I know it was a sweet one. It tasted good and I liked it. I felt stuffing when I had finished the egg, so I had the steamed stuffed bun left. Maybe I will eat it when I am hungry later. Although my lunchbox is not the typical Chinese lunchbox, it consists of carbohydrates, fiber and protein, which all support our bodies and they are like finger food so that it is easy to eat them when you are outdoors.
I would say - It wasn't until I had a bite of the Zongzi that I realised it was sweet.
June 25, 2021
Written Exercise 202 - MY LUNCHBOX In the picture, it was my lunchbox for today. It contained an apple and a Zongzi (sticky rice dumpling), which were both about the size of my fist, a small sized boiled egg and a mini sized steamed stuffed bun. I ate all of them apart from the last one ( I mean the mini sized steamed stuffed bun). Not until I had a bite of the Zongzi did I know it was a sweet one. It tasted good and I liked it. I felt stuffed after finishing the egg, so I had the steamed stuffed bun left. Maybe I will eat it when I am hungry later. Although my lunchbox is not a typical Chinese lunchbox, it consists of carbohydrates, fiber and protein, which all support our bodies and they are like finger food which is easy to eat when you are outdoors.
June 25, 2021
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