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The danger of moral victories It is a fact in Chile nowadays we are celebrating more often our moral victories, especially in sport competition. But what does suppose to mean? It is considering as a success the second, third or any position that is not the first place. Probably our lack of achievements has led us to this point, where the only thing does really matter is how brave we fought in the event. From certain point of view it is not completely wrong to recognize people who have sacrificed for the glory of our country even though they didn’t win exactly a title or something similar. However, what does happen when we forgot our winners for remembering too much another character that actually lost a battle? This is when we have to see our history but not in the sport field, in something even bigger, in our sociality. Last May 21st we celebrate the naval combat of Iquique, a battle which all Chileans remember because the captain Arturo Prat died gallantly in a unequal fight. So we remember him as our greatest hero in our history but nobody has in mind the name of Carlos Condell, a soldier of the same rank and with his wooden ship defeated a Peruvian battleship that was one the most advanced of all south America in that time. Probably the way we are now it is just the reflection or result of our behavior in the history.

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The danger of moral victories

It is a fact in Chile nowadays that we celebrate our moral victories more often, especially in sport competition. But what is that supposed to mean?  Second, third or any position that is not first place is considered a success. Probably our lack of achievement has led us to this point, where the only thing that really matters is how brave we fought in the event.

From a certain point of view, it is not completely wrong to recognize people who have sacrificed for the glory of our country, even though they didn’t exactly win a title or something similar. However, what happens when we forget our winners, and instead remember too often another character that actually lost a battle? This is when we have to see our history not in the sports field, but in something even bigger, in our society.

Last May 21st we celebrated the naval combat of Iquique, a battle which all Chileans remember because the captain Arturo Prat died gallantly in a unequal fight. So we remember him as our greatest hero in our history, but no one remembers the name of Carlos Condell, a soldier of the same rank who, with his wooden ship, defeated a Peruvian battleship that was one the most advanced of all South America at that time.

Probably the way we are now is just a reflection or result of our behavior in our history.

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The danger of moral victories

It is a fact that in Chile nowadays we are celebrating more often our moral victories more often especially in sports competitions. But what is this does supposed to mean? It is considered to be as a success if we achieve a the second, third or for that matter any position that is not the first place. Probably our lack of achievements has led us to this point, where the only thing that does really matters is how hard we played brave we fought in the event.

From a certain point of view it is not completely wrong to recognize people who have sacrificed themselves for the glory of our country even though they didn’t win exactly win a title or something similar. However, what does happens when we forgot our winners and spend too much time for remembering too much another character those that actually lost a battle? This is when we have to realize that see our national history is more important than but not in the sports field. in something even bigger, in our sociality.

Last May 21 we celebrated the naval combat of Iquique, a battle which all Chileans remember because the when Captain Arturo Prat died gallantly in an unevenly fought battle. unequal fight. So We remember him as the our greatest hero in our history although but nobody can remember has in mind the name of Carlos Condell. He was a soldier of the same rank and with his wooden ship, he defeated a Peruvian battleship that was one the most advanced of in all of South America in at that time.

Probably the way we are now it is just a the reflection or the result of our past behavior in the history.

Well done Carlos! Sorry it took me so long to correct your post.

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