Hideki
I made some sentences in English. Are they correct?🤔 ☀️The average lifespan of humans in Japan is about 83years old. ☀️The mean tempereture in July in Japan is about 25 degree. ☀️My English skill is below average, so I have to study more. ☀️My hight is above average in Japan. ☀️I think there is not average person. So everyone has own characteristics.
Mar 4, 2021 11:18 PM
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I made some sentences in English. Are they correct?🤔 ☀️The average lifespan of Japanese people is about 83years old. ☀️The mean temperature in July in Japan is about 25 degrees. ☀️My English skill is below average, so I have to study more. ☀️My height is above average in Japan. ☀️I think there is no average person so everyone has their own characteristics.
They are very well written. When it comes to someone’s height, I would usually say “she is taller (shorter) than average/ she is taller than the kids in her age. “
March 5, 2021
I made some sentences in English. Are they correct?🤔 ☀️The average lifespan of humans in Japan is about 83 years old. ☀️The mean tempereture of Japan in July is about 25 degrees. ☀️My English skills are below average, so I have to study more. ☀️My height is above average in Japan. ☀️I don’t think there is an average person because everyone has their own characteristics.
March 5, 2021
I have written some sentences in English. Are they correct?🤔 ☀️The average lifespan of a Japanese person is about 83 years old. ☀️In Japan, the mean temperature in July is about 25 degrees. ☀️My English language skills are below average, so I have to study more. ☀️My height is above average in Japan. ☀️I don't think there is an average person. Everyone has own characteristics.
This is very clear and well written. I certainly don't think your English is below average. It's much better than my Japanese! It makes perfect sense to say 'human in Japan' but 'Japanese person' sounds more natural. We don't use the word human that often and mostly in scientific contexts. On the second point, your wording also made sense but the new structure flows more naturally because the verb (is) and the subject (mean temperature) are closer together. This makes it easier to quickly understand. For 'English language skills' you could also say 'English speaking' 'level of English' or just 'English' Keep up the good work!
March 4, 2021
I made some sentences in English. Are they correct?🤔 ☀️The average life expectancy in Japan is about 83 years old. ☀️The mean temperature in July in Japan is about 25 degrees.☀️My English skill is below average, so I have to study more. ☀️My height is above average in Japan. ☀️I don’t think there is an average person. Everyone has unique characteristics.
March 4, 2021
I made some sentences in English. Are they correct?🤔 ☀️The average lifespan of humans in Japan is about 83 years old. ☀️The mean temperature in July in Japan is about 25 degree. ☀️My English skill is below average, so I have to study more. ☀️My height is above average in Japan. ☀️I think there is not average person. So everyone has own characteristics.
March 4, 2021
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