IELTS Writing Task I (Please correct it)

You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job

 Dear Friend,
Hopefully you are doing well. As I told you that I got admission in computer department, University of New Jersey for MCSE. I will leave Pakistan on 12th of coming month. The duration of my course will be eight months.
During the stay I can’t bear my whole expenses without job because you know living in USA is quite expensive and I am coming from Pakistan where there is a big difference of currency exchange rate. I already deposited all my saving for admission.
Therefore I decided to do a part time job which will help me in my finance and for this reason I request you to find some job which starts after 2 o clock. You are in USA from last 5 years you have friends and colleagues there, tell them to find job for me they are locals there they have contacts and friends working there so If they can help me to find a job
 
Yours faithfully
Awais   

will be provided or will provide at time of selection (if slected or select) will be provided or will provide at time of selection (if selected or select)? Thanks in advance

Correct it please. Managing Director, KP IT Board, Peshawar. Subject: - NTS TEST FOR CCNA CERTIFICATION WAS OUT OF COURSE. Dear Sir, With great reverence, it is stated that I had given a test of NTS for CCNA certification under this roll number 1234 on dated: 28th June 2015, but unfortunately test was 50% irrelevant, Most probably not only I but all candidates prepare the basics of general networking or for the first paper of Cisco Routing Switching of Associate level (CCNA) but 50% test came from IP Telephony and VoIP technology which was totally irrelevant. Moreover, IT Board not given us any proper syllabus for the test. Therefore I humbly request to you please re-conduct the test with proper syllabus to CCNA candidates. I hope you will take necessary action ASAP. Waiting for your positive reply. Thanks Regards

Correct it please. Managing Director, KP IT Board, Peshawar. Subject: - NTS TEST FOR CCNA CERTIFICATION WAS OUT OF COURSE. Dear Sir, With great reverence, it is stated that I had given a test of NTS for CCNA certification under this roll number 1234 on dated: 28th June 2015, but unfortunately test was 50% irrelevant, Most probably not only I but all candidates prepare the basics of general networking or for the first paper of Cisco Routing Switching of Associate level (CCNA) but 50% test came from IP Telephony and VoIP technology which was totally irrelevant. Moreover, IT Board not given us any proper syllabus for the test. Therefore I humbly request to you please re-conduct the test with proper syllabus to CCNA candidates. I hope you will take necessary action ASAP. Waiting for your positive reply.

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Correct it please. Divisional Engineer, Date: - 26-06-2015 Abdara (university Road) Exchange, PTCL, Peshawar. Subject: - STOP BILLING AND REMOVAL OF THIS NO 091-5611621 FROM MY NAME. Dear Sir, Kindly stop billing and remove this 091-5611621 from my name because I don’t understand why you are send bills without any connection, there is no line, no internet connection but bills are coming on regular basis, you don’t have a system which shows that there is no internet usage on this 091-5611621 . Moreover, So many times I told to your staff on phone that there is no line and equipment’s were installed but I do not know what is wrong with them, still bill is coming. So please without wasting any more time stop this billing and remove this number 091-5611621 from name. Your reply will be highly appreciated. Thanking you in anticipation. Regards

difference between come and comes I comes or I come you comes or you come he/she come or comes

you want to make some changes in this file or you want to do some changes?

difference between waste of money and abuse of money?