yanzi's notebook entry: Dec 01, 2010

Why Do People Like to Buy Lotteries?
Nowadays,there are all kinds of <strike>lorrerites</strike> lotteries exist in our society. A great number of people <strike>could</strike> like to buy lotteries <strike>lotteties</strike>. Before I express my own opinion about this social situation, we could discuss our views on this phenomenon.
Why do people like to buy lotteries?Firstly,with the development of our society,the level of many citizen's life could improve<strike>d</strike>, and their life<strike>'s quality</strike>  could become better than before.Everybody could earn more money and they need not to spend the entire <strike>whole</strike> money on supporting their family.So they want to buy lotteries and it could make their life more interesting.What' more is that buying lotteries could represent the level of economic development and the people spending their excess money to buy lotteries may earn more money. Lastly but not least,this phenomenon could reflect our social instrument's integrity.
In my opinion,the government constructed the concept of lottery, <strike>and</strike> while encouraging citizens to buy<strike>ing</strike> lotteries not noly improve the <strike>society</strike> progress of our society and ecnomic development,but also it will bring more of a comfortable and an enrichment to the enviroment.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I am John <strike>in</strike> from China, I want to make friends with you. I engage in finance and act as an assistant of CFO. If you have the same experience<strike> with</strike> as me, pls{please} free to contact me...awaiting for you.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a Japanese male working in Paris. {I am a man from Japan who is now working in Paris} If you are interested in the language exchange, English-Japanese or French-Japanese, feel free to contact me.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, everybody. My name is Li Lei,a Beijing man {this is okay but better said " a man from Beijing"}. I graduated from Beijing Institute of Technology three years ago.Now I work <strike>in</strike> at a car factory where I can get a handsome income to <strike>surport</strike> support my family. I have passed the College English Test Band Six at a high grade, but I think my English is still not good enough. So I am going to try <strike>impro</strike><strike>ve</strike> improving my English. Italki is a wonderful site for everybody since every language is accessible for them to enhance their language level. I am glad to make friends with everyone here. Bejing is a world famous city, where it welcomes everyone to come here for a visit, and I can be a good guidance <strike>for</strike> to you <strike>then</strike>.

delong's notebook entry: Nov 27, 2010

Above all, I was tired <strike>for kind</strike> because of exams,but the show must <strike>be</strike> go on<font class="Apple-style-span" color="#FF0000">.</font><font class="Apple-style-span"> S</font>o I have to work harder, learn and prepare for the worst. I <strike>was</strike> fell in love <strike>to</strike> with tea and always smoking. Nothing is going to change...just in wait. I like the midnights because it is very quiet.and this is the belonging of my world. Okay, this time is the end.

it is PETS5 Writing part, correct it .... lol ~~~ thanks

the question: whether someone should stay in one place all his life?
Write an article to express your point of view on this topic. You should write no less than 250 words.

"Whether we should stay in one place <strike>all</strike> for our entire life?"<strike> this question</strike> is so commonly seen in modern society that it is no longer <strike>seemed to be </strike>a strange topic. However in previous generations, our parents and grandparents<strike>, who</strike> were happy <strike>that living</strike> to live in one place, even in <strike>one</strike> a small district! Because their <strike>subconsious</strike><strike>ness</strike> subconscious and <strike>our </strike>traditional thinking. <strike>tell them:"</strike> <strike>it</strike> help demonstrate<strike>s</strike> the<strike>ir</strike> loyalty to their ancestors." In addition, they also want to bring <strike>up</strike> their descendants <strike>at here</strike> and <strike>let</strike> have their descendants come here to inherit their property. Usually, Chinese look upon their old property ( the <strike>more</strike> older it is, the more importance it has) as an example of their root. Everything would grow base upon that root! So, that is why the old generations long<strike>s</strike> <strike>for</strike> to live <strike>living</strike> in one place.
Though, in my opinion, their era is gone. It is the modern era now with sufficient openings and reformations in China.  Since 1990s, more and more new notions were brought upon <strike>swormed</strike><strike> into</strike> China that we got a lot out of it. Thereafter, "Stay in one place in someone's entire life" will <strike>be</strike> no longer <strike>seemed</strike> be popular.
Firstly, <strike>at</strike> the presents of the environmental pollution, I think is a big issue not only for us, but also <strike>arround</strike> the entire world, especially in Beijing and Shanghai, the so- called prosperous and sophistcated cities in China. Secondly, the difference in lifestyles, we often  called  "the generation gaps" in amongst our family that <strike>is why</strike> sometimes we <strike>can't</strike> couldn't live with our parents' expected needs? <strike>very compatible.</strike> Of course, It does not mean that we are not submissive <strike>dutiful</strike>. <strike>Last</strike> Thirdly, I obviously think  it is to <strike>persue</strike> pursue a <strike>more</strike> perfect life and reach a higher level of living standard! Therefore, all our efforts<strike> from us</strike> points to one direction <strike>one destin</strike><strike>y</strike>  and that is the  higher living standard. Apparently <strike>Manifest</strike>, however, it <strike>have had </strike><strike>big </strike>collides greatly with our old notions.
<strike>F</strike><strike>inally</strike> In conclusion, if they let me choose, I will select to move to another location  <strike>" to change place I lived" </strike>without even thinking twice.