I have written some sentences in English. Are they correct?🤔 ☀️I love sports. For one thing, exercising makes me more healthy. For another, I feel excited when I watch a sports game. ☀️I study Engl

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I have written some sentences in English. Are they correct?🤔 ☀️I love sports. For one thing, exercising makes me more healthy. For another, I feel excited when I watch a sports game. ☀️I study English hard. For one thing, I want to have English conversations everyone in the future. For another, I want to make a presentation at international conference meeting. ☀️I went out with my room key being unlocked ☀️I know that athlete who are running at the stadium

Mar 5, 2021 10:18 PM

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I have written some sentences in English. Are they correct?🤔 ☀️I love sports. For one thing, exercising makes me more healthy. Also I feel excited when I watch a sports game. ☀️I am studying English hard. For one thing, I want to talk in English with everyone in the future. And I want to make a presentation in at international conference meeting. ☀️I went out with my room key being unlocked. ☀️I know that athlete who is running at the stadium.

Keep the good work up 😊

March 6, 2021

I have written some sentences in English. Are they correct?🤔 ☀️I love sports. For one thing, exercising makes me more healthy. Another thing is that I feel excited when I watch a sports game. ☀️I study English hard. For one thing, I want to have English conversations with everyone in the future. Another thing is that I want to make a presentation at international conference meeting. ☀️I went out with my room key being unlocked ☀️I know that athlete who is running in the stadium

After using "For one thing" in our first sentence, we typically use the phrase "Another thing is that." I think the 3rd sentence was meant to say "I went out with my room key, and I left the room unlocked." Hope that helps!

March 5, 2021

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