Writing about a journey The adventure happened in December of 2018. Me, my husband, my mother in law and my sister in law came to visit the “End of the World” known like Ushuaia, the southest city in

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Writing about a journey The adventure happened in December of 2018. Me, my husband, my mother in law and my sister in law came to visit the “End of the World” known like Ushuaia, the southest city in Argentina (south america continent). My husband had a dream to go to visit this place by car. He thought that the view and penguins would be amazing. The journey lasted 28 days, being that 24 days we had to drive because we went and came back to Brazil by car doing more than 20.000 km. So, it was a tired and long trip. When we finally arrived in the “End of the World” there was a kind of overbooking in the hotel that we had booked. There weren't any other hotels with disponible rooms, at least neither one that we could pay for. So, after a long conversation with the hotel’s owner, we got a disponible room in another inferior hotel. In this hotel, we could listen to the hotel’s owner arguing with her husband at night. The room was tiny and we had to share the bathroom with another four people. But in the end, we could know and visit one of the most amazing places in the world.

15 มิ.ย. 2021 เวลา 23:46

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Writing about a journey The adventure happened in December of 2018. My husband, my mother-in-law, my sister-in- law and I went to visit the “End of the World” known as Ushuaia, in a southeast city of Argentina (in the continent of South America). My husband had a dream to go to visit this place by car. He thought that the view and penguins would be amazing. The journey lasted 28 days. We had to drive 24 days because we went and came back to Brazil by car doing more than 20.000 km. So it was a tiring and long trip. When we finally arrived at the “End of the World” there was an overbooking situation in the hotel that we had booked. There weren't any other hotels with available rooms, at least none that we could pay for. So, after a long conversation with the hotel’s owner, we got an available room in another inferior hotel. In this hotel we could listen to the hotel’s owner arguing with her husband at night. The room was tiny and we had to share the bathroom with four other people but in the end we knew we visited one of the most amazing places in the world.

Just a few corrections....Never start a sentence wi the word "me". Always put yourself at the end of the sentence when you have a list of people. I wanted to keep your thoughts and but i changed some words to make it "flow" a little bit better. Good job! Was this in the southern part of Argentina because of the penguins and the distance from Brazil?

16 มิถุนายน 2021

Writing about a journey The adventure happened in December of 2018. Me, my husband, my mother in law and my sister in law came to visit the “End of the World” known like Ushuaia, the southest city in Argentina (south America continent). My husband had a dream to go to visit this place by car. He thought that the view and penguins would be amazing. The journey lasted 28 days, being that 24 days we had to drive because we went and came back to Brazil by car doing more than 20.000 km. So, it was a tired and long trip. When we finally arrived in the “End of the World” there was a kind of overbooking in the hotel that we had booked. There weren't any other hotels with disponible rooms, at least neither one that we could pay for. So, after a long conversation with the hotel’s owner, we got a disponible room in another inferior hotel. In this hotel, we could listen to the hotel’s owner arguing with her husband at night. The room was tiny and we had to share the bathroom with another four people. But in the end, we could know and visit one of the most amazing places in the world.

wow so nice

15 มิถุนายน 2021

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