albert magadán
At he present I work in a retail company, I studied Mathematics but actually my last jobs are closer like engineering. I like my job however I miss going to the office since due to pandemic all the week is homeoffice. I am learning english because I would like to get a job in other country. I love programming and analyze data.
20 ก.พ. 2021 เวลา 23:49
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At present, I work for a retail company. Although, I studied mathematics at university, my recent jobs have been closer to engineering. I like my work, especially programming and analyzing data. However, I must work from home due to the pandemic, and I miss going to the office. I am learning English, because I want to get a job in another country.
Excellent! Some minor problems with punctuation and transitions between ideas.
21 กุมภาพันธ์ 2021
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At present, I work in a retail company. I studied mathematics, but actually my last jobs were closer to engineering. I like my job, however I miss going to the office since, due to the pandemic, I work from a home-office all week. I am learning English because I would like to get a job in another country. I love programming and analyzing data.
Nice writing! I’ve corrected some of the words that you had misused, and made a few other small corrections (sentence structure & gerund).
21 กุมภาพันธ์ 2021
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