薇林 Vera
你好!请检查一下我的翻译。 1 Person A: Do you need a box lunch? Person B: Do you have vegetarian box lunches? Person A: Sorry, the vegetarian box lunches are sold out. Person B: What else do you have? Person A: We also have instant noodles. Person B: Then I’ll buy instant noodles. 2 Person A: Dad, would you like to sleep in the upper bunk or lower bunk? The upper bunk is quieter; you can have a good night’s sleep. The lower bunk is more convenient. Person B: Then I’ll take the lower bunk. I brought an extra blanket. Do you need it? Person A: One blanket is enough for me. 3 Person A: Hi, Mom. We’ve returned to Beijing from Yunnan. Person B: Is that so? How did you get to Yunnan? Person A: We signed up online and joined a tour group. Then we took a train to Kunming and waited for Xuemei and Ke Lin. Person B:Did you buy “soft” sleeper tickets or “hard” sleeper tickets? Person A: We wanted to practice speaking Chinese with the other passengers, so Lisha and I bought two tickets for a hard sleeper. Person B: Which places did you go to? Person A: We went to the Stone Forest, Dali, and Lijiang. We also went to see the Great Snow Mountain. Person B: What was your impression of Yunnan? Person A: Yunnan was really interesting! The landscape of each place was different. There were many fun places we didn’t have time to go to. Person A: Next time, then 1. - 你要不要盒饭? - 你有没有素盒饭? - 不好意思,素盒饭都卖完了。 - 那你还有什么? -我还有方便面。 - 那请给我方便面。 2. - 爸,你想在上卧铺上还是下卧铺睡觉?上卧铺比下卧铺安静,不过上卧铺没有下卧铺方便。 - 那我就选下的。我带来额外的毯子,你要不要? -一张就够。 3. - 嗨妈,我们从云南回到北京。 - 是吗?你怎么样到云南? - 我们网上报名而且参加团。然后火车上到昆明,而且 等了雪梅和柯林。 -你买了软卧还是硬卧? - 我们想跟别人练习一下中文,所以我和丽莎买到了两张硬卧票。 -那你去什么地方? - 我们去石林,大理和丽江。我们还去了看看伟大的雪山。 -你对云南的印象怎么样? - 真有意思啊!每个地方有不一样景色。由于没有时间,所以我们没去过很多玩儿的地方。 -那下次去吧
20 ส.ค. 2024 เวลา 13:34
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你的中文很不错。大部分都没问题,有一点小建议: 1、“那我就选下的。我带来额外的毯子” 改为 “那我就选下铺。我多带了一条毯子。” 2、“我们网上报名而且参加团。然后火车上到昆明” 改为 “我们在网上报名参加了一个旅行团。然后我们坐火车去昆明” 3、“我们去石林,大理和丽江。我们还去了看看伟大的雪山。” 改为 “我们去了石林,大理和丽江。我们还去看了大雪山。”
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伟大的雪山 is okay. For example: 去朝拜伟大的玉龙雪山。
21 สิงหาคม 2024
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