Please help me correct my writing🙏 Topic: You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Dear Sir White, My name is Kazu. I have seen you looking for someone who can look after your kid and I am interested in the job. Living in Australia is one of my bucket lists and I have recently quit my job in my country so I am ready to move to Australia and take care of your child. I have worked with kids for six years in Japan and I like playing with kids. I am a clean outgoing person and up for something new. Living abroad may be difficult at first, but I want to push myself out of my comfort zone and experience things that I cannot try in my country. When I have free time, I’d love to do a road trip from Adelaide to Perth hoping to see a lot of Australian native species such as wallabies, koalas, and kangaroos. Thank you for reading this letter. I hope I hear from you very soon. Sincerely Kazu

Please help me correct my writing🙏 Topic: You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Dear Sir White, My name is Kazu. I have seen you are looking for someone who can look after your child and I am really interested in the job. Living in Australia is actually on my bucket list and I have recently quit my job in my country so I am ready to move in Australia and take care of your child. I have worked with kids for six years in Japan and I like playing with kids. I am a clean outgoing person and up for something new. Living abroad may be difficult at first, but I want to push myself out of my comfort zone and experience things that I cannot try in my country. When I have free time, I’d love to do a road trip from Adelaide to Perth, hoping to see a lot of Australian native species such as wallabies, koalas and kangaroos. Thank you for reading this letter. I hope I hear from you very soon. Sincerely Kazu