My family is so important for me. My mom is the best woman I knew in my entire life, she is so strong and powerful. I have one little brother, he’s sixteen years old and his name is Pablo. He’s bril

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Laura

My family is so important for me. My mom is the best woman I knew in my entire life, she is so strong and powerful. I have one little brother, he’s sixteen years old and his name is Pablo. He’s brilliant at sports. With my father I don’t have a good relationship at this moment.

20 พ.ย. 2020 เวลา 13:51

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My family is so important for me(1). My mom is the best woman I knew in my entire life(2), she is so strong and powerful. I have one little brother, he’s sixteen years old and his name is Pablo. He’s brilliant at sports. With my father I don’t have a good relationship at this moment (3).

This is really good 🙂. Just some minor changes: (1) I think “for me” is okay, but “to me” sounds more natural. (2) “I knew in my entire life” suggests that you’re no longer alive! You could instead say: “My mom is the best woman I know, she is...”. (3) “at the moment” or “at this moment in time”.

20 พฤศจิกายน 2020

My family is so important for me. My mom is the best woman I knew in my entire life, she is so strong and powerful. I've got a little brother, he’s in his sixteen and his name is Pablo. He’s brilliant at sports. I don’t have a good relationship with my father right know.

Hi Laura, my name is Osman from Somalia Actually, I love my family, but just I live in Turkey and they live in Somalia, really I missed them. I have go four sisters and one brother, they are under the age of 18 and I'm the eildest one. My father is a bussiness man and I like to talk with him because he shares me an important advices and he encourage me, to my mind it's extreamly important to make a good relationship with your father because he knows everything what ever you plan. Great tex(:

20 พฤศจิกายน 2020

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