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Grammar: 동안 1) 3년 동안 중국어를 공부했어요 - I’ve studied Chinese for 3 years 2) 제 룸메이트들이 파티를 하는 동안 저는 침실 안에서 에세이를 썼어요 - While my housemates were having a party I wrote an essay in my bedroom 3) 저는 1년 동안 한국에 살고 싶어요 - I want to live in South Korea for one year 4) 어제 우리는 2시간 동안 운동했어요. 오늘 너무 피곤해요! - We exercised for 2 hours yesterday. Today I’m so tired! Thank you for any corrections/feedback❤️❤️

20 ต.ค. 2020 เวลา 14:48

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Perfect no grammar error at all. But Why can i feel it must be written by a foreigner haha. We dont say 침실 just 방 is better. And number 4 is good but sounds like a bit textbook so if i were u i would say, 어제 2시간 동안 운동해서 오늘 너무 피곤해요ㅠㅠ(better removing 우리)

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