I visited Hakuba in Nagano to see my good friends! They bought a very old brewery there. There are some bar areas, sake barrels and more than 20 rooms. At the moment the rooms are tatty and dirty

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I visited Hakuba in Nagano to see my good friends! They bought a very old brewery there. There are some bar areas, sake barrels and more than 20 rooms. At the moment the rooms are tatty and dirty but they will renovate the whole building! It may take 10years!!

22 ต.ค. 2020 เวลา 5:49

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I visited Hakuba in Nagano to see my good friends! They bought a very old brewery there. There are some bar areas, sake barrels, and more than 20 rooms. At the moment, the rooms are tatty and dirty, but they will renovate the whole building! It may take 10 years!!

Watch your commas. When you have a list, you need a comma before “and.” Also, when you have “but” and the subject in the first independent clause is different from the second, you need a comma. Here are some examples: I like to eat desserts, but my husband does not. I like to run but prefer to bike. I like biking, kayaking, and rock climbing. Excellent job! Best of luck to your friends!

22 ตุลาคม 2020

I visited Hakuba in Nagano to see my good friends! They bought a very old brewery there. There are some bar areas, sake barrels and more than 20 rooms. At the moment the rooms are tatty and dirty, but they plan to renovate the whole building in the future! They think it may take 10years!!

What an amazing project! So cool! I want to see what it’s like in ten years time :)

23 ตุลาคม 2020

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