Well, i love the culture USA, i things that is amazing. But the point most important is that can talk and understand others people and my goals is live there because i have soo many opportunity.

Daniel

19 ม.ค. 2021 เวลา 5:28

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Well, I love the US’s culture. I think it is amazing. But the most important reason is that I can talk and understand other people and one of my goals is to live there because I can get many opportunities.

19 มกราคม 2021

Well, I love the culture USA, I think that is amazing. But the most important point is talking and understanding others people perfectly and my goal is to live there because by that I could have many opportunities.

You wrote pretty good. Only formation of your sentences was not correct. "So, try to keep the words in order "-this is a piece of an advice from me.

19 มกราคม 2021

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