Lately I have had quite heavy days, since I am trying to exercise every day, because since the pandemic began my life has become very cedentary, I almost always work from a desk and I rarely leave my

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Lately I have had quite heavy days, since I am trying to exercise every day, because since the pandemic began my life has become very cedentary, I almost always work from a desk and I rarely leave my house, so I I force myself to exercise and move my body because I don't want my body to be damaged over time. I usually work teaching Spanish and then I do some legal things, since my part-time job is teaching and my main job is being a lawyer.

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Lately I have had quite heavy days, since I am trying to exercise every day, because since the pandemic began my life has become very sedentary. I almost always work at a desk and I rarely leave my house, so I force myself to exercise and move my body because I don't want my body to be damaged over time. I usually work teaching Spanish and then I do some legal things, since my part-time job is teaching and my main job is being a lawyer.

I would suggest changing the comma after sedentary to a period, as it was getting to be a run-on sentence. Good on you for committing to exercise :) keep it up!

23 กุมภาพันธ์ 2022

Lately I have had some quite heavy days, because I am trying to exercise every day. Since the beginning of the pandemic my life has become very sedentary, I almost always work on a desk and I rarely leave my house, so I force myself to exercise and move my body, because I don't want my body to suffer the consequences over time. I usually work teaching Spanish and then I do some legal things, since my part-time job is teaching and my main job is being a lawyer.

22 กุมภาพันธ์ 2022

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