Hu Tao
Today is a nice day

The life needs full of challenges  ,so be sure to have their own goal in life,to give your pressure will   have power . Today is important day,because I reached my first aim,yeah ~

26 พ.ย. 2015 เวลา 15:22
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Thank you  correct me mistakes , I 'll improved my English continue , is good meet you 

27 พฤศจิกายน 2015
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The life needs full of challenges ,so be sure to have their own goal in life,to give your pressure will have power . Today is important day,because I reached my first aim,yeah ~

 

I would write it as:

 

Our lives are full of challenges, so we should make sure to have our own goals in life. We should not cave in to pressure and have willpower. Today is an important day for me, because I have reached my first aim. Yay!

 

Well, I tried my best to change this accordingly. 

26 พฤศจิกายน 2015

Yeah. I know 

27 พฤศจิกายน 2015

Today is a good day.

Because it's Friday.

You know black Friday?

Someday like double eleven.

Shopping shopping shopping~~

27 พฤศจิกายน 2015