My perfect day starts with a delicius breakfast. After I walk in the square next to home.
Then I go to work. I have lunch with my friends next to my job. I work a little more untel four o'clock. I get home at six o'clok. I have dinner at seven o'clock and go to bed at eleven 0'clock.
My perfect day involves work also, Ana! :)
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