Yesterday I went to eyelash perm salon. I was worried about the salon because it was really cheap. However, the salon was good and I wanted to go again.

shiojam

10 มิ.ย. 2023 เวลา 0:56

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Yesterday, I went to an eyelash perm salon. I was worried about the salon because it was really cheap. However, the salon was good, and I wanted to go again.

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10 มิถุนายน 2023

Yesterday I went to an eyelash perm salon. I was worried about the salon because it was really cheap. However, the salon was good and I want to go again.

10 มิถุนายน 2023

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