Zark Baron
私が悲しい!T_T 私ただ「とらドア」を見るよ!「とらドラ」はすごい、でもエンヂングは悲しいよ!私はなきますよ!アアアアアアア、とらドラ!!!T_T I just watched "Toradora"! "Toradora" is amazing, but the ending is sad! I'm crying! AAAAAAH, TORADORA!!! T_T どのアニメは私を見ているか?私を悲しいアニメひつよういません。私ひつようハッピーのアニメ。さ、みんなさん、どのアニメ私を見られるか? Which anime should I watch? I don't want a sad anime. I want a happy anime. So, guys, which anime should I watch? Okay, this were written in an outburst of extreme sadness, since I just finished a really good anime. So I probably made some really brutal mistakes up there. So, please, could you correct me? And also tell me which anime should I watch now? Thanks! またね~
31 พ.ค. 2012 เวลา 6:55
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おもいきって、主語(subject)を「僕(boku)」に変えてみました。どうかな?

 

悲しい!T_T

悲しい!T_T

は&が:if it is "ga", the thing which is focused wouldn't be the fact you're sad but who is sad.Try to read my correction below remembering this. :-)

 

私ただ「とらドア」を見るよ!「とらドラ」はすごい、でもエンヂングは悲しいよ!私はなきますよ!アアアアアアア、とらドラ!!!T_T
I just watched "Toradora"! "Toradora" is amazing, but the ending is sad! I'm crying! AAAAAAH, TORADORA!!! T_T

僕はちょうど今「とらドア」を見たところです。とらドアはすごいけど、エンディングが悲しすぎる大泣き中です。あーーーーーーとらドラーーーーーー!!!T_T


ちょうど今+Vたform+ところ: just did something

けど、: means "but" just like でも、しかし、だけど. Hoewever, it can be placed after adjective and verbs like that, while others can't.

いadj + すぎる: means "too"+ adjective. its a common expression especially among the young recently. It is originally used as a negative way but its changing and is used as a positive way as well. ex)kawaisugiru / utukushisugiru + noun. Ever heard?

大泣き中です。:I changed just because it sounds more natural. it simply means, I'm crying out now.

----: Its actually the both is correct. In just case you don't know that we use this symbol(?) a lot.


どのアニメは私を見ているか?私を悲しいアニメひつよういません。私ひつようハッピーのアニメ。さ、みんなさん、どのアニメ私を見られるか?
Which anime should I watch? I don't want a sad anime. I want a happy anime. So, guys, which anime should I watch?
僕はどのアニメ見るべき?悲しいアニメは要りません(いりません)たのしいアニメがいいです。さあ、みなさん、僕はどのアニメを見るべき?

Sth + を + transitive verb: Do Sth like watch anime.. other example) ピアノを弾きます(play the piano)、ごはんを食べます(eat meal)

Vじしょform+べき:shuld do something

要りません(いりません): I changed just because it sound more natural in this text. it simply means "don't need". 必,kanji, means something like abosolute/definate. If you want to use 必要, 必要ありません is correct.

いadj + noun : 美しい馬(うつくしいうま beautiful horse),おもしろい人(funny guy)

ハッピーな is actually not Japanese( because happy is not japanese) but its なadj these days.

なadj + noun : so you are right. ハッピーなアニメ is correct.

 

What do you thinkg using "boku"? Watashi is a kind of all-powerful thing though.

 

Okay, this were written in an outburst of extreme sadness, since I just finished a really good anime. So I probably made some really brutal mistakes up there. So, please, could you correct me? And also tell me which anime should I watch now? Thanks! またね~

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