finding Mr.Right Today my roommates and I go to cinema to see 'finding Mr.Right'.It's more confident I think there is true love in the world.Now,I don't know who is my Mr.Right and where is he.but I'm

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finding Mr.Right Today my roommates and I go to cinema to see 'finding Mr.Right'.It's more confident I think there is true love in the world.Now,I don't know who is my Mr.Right and where is he.but I'm sure he will emerge one day. And go to Empire State Building in Valentine's Day becomes one wish in my life.

30 มี.ค. 2013 เวลา 13:44

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Finding Mr.Right

Today my roommates and I went to the cinema to see 'Finding Mr. Right'. I am confident that there is true love in the world. Now, I don't know who is my Mr. Right and where he is, but I'm sure he will emerge one day.
And going to Empire State Building on Valentine's Day has become one wish in my life.

30 มีนาคม 2013

I don't think I'm able to correct you because I'm not fluent in English but I noticed that you put some verbs in the wrong tenses. Your roomates and you went to the cinema. Go to Empire State Building in Valentine's Day became...

30 มีนาคม 2013

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