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this is a poem I wrote in Russian, then translated into English. You should not to speak about love, Because I don’t want to know love. You should not to make light dreams, Because I don’t want to know this dreams. You should not invite in country me, Where day is clear and night is light, And where you not was. I will not be. And where spring stands eternal. You should not to ask about things me, Which you cannot to dive: About blue sky about happy. You should not to allow me in captivity of love. You should not to expect answer on letter, Because I burn his, Or it is casualties. You should not to expect. I did not expect as. You should not to look on heaven And grieve. You should not to pine. We cannot believe in marvel, We cannot get back gold life time. You should not to speak about love, You should not to think, to ring, and to invite. You should not spare alive heart. You should not to speak about love.
2 ต.ค. 2013 เวลา 8:21
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You should not speak so fast so that you can fit your words into that alloted minute. I cannot understand a word you say without looking at the script. With you Russian accent, at first I thought you were speaking in Russian! Try to speak and enunciate each word properly. Doesn't matter if you cannot recite the entire poem. No point if we cannot understand you.
2 ตุลาคม 2013

this is a poem I wrote in Russian, then translated into English.

You should not to speak about love,
Because I don’t want to know love.
You should not to make light dreams,
Because I don’t want to know this these dreams.
You should not invite in me to the countryside me,
Where day is clear and night is light,
And where you are not was I will not be.
And where spring stands eternal.
You should not to ask me about things me,
Which you cannot to dive into:
About blue sky, about happiness.
You should not to allow me in captivity to be a prisoner of love.
You should not to expect any answer on by letter,
Because I burn his,
Or it is a casualtyies.
You should not to expect. I did not expect either as.
You should not to look on to heaven
And Or  grieve. You should not to pine.
We cannot believe in marvels,
We cannot get back golden life time.
You should not to speak about love,
You should not to think, to ring, and to or invite.
You should not spare a living heart.
You should not to speak about love.

2 ตุลาคม 2013
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2 ตุลาคม 2013
Hi! I'm Ron in New York, USA and I am a communications engineer. I love your poem! Very thoughtful! I like very much to make new friends all over the world and to help people improve their spoken English. If you want to improve your English, I will be happy to help you! And if you want a new friend, lets be friends! :) My Skype: ron.jenkins86 My QQ: 1990992857
2 ตุลาคม 2013
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