A woman to remember

my hometown, Beijing even out of China. I need to make myself full of courage because your little girl face to a new challenge now, I looking forward to success and I am fear to failure, so sometimes I am hot-headed and sometime I am timid, I am so empty now. Grandma, I miss you so much, and I know you are instilling the spirit of quiet and peaceful in my body slowly.

I am planning to leave my hometown, Beijing, and even to leave China itself for life in a new country. I need to fill my heart with courage, because your little girl is facing a new challenge now. I am looking forward to success, but also afraid of failure. Sometimes I am hot-headed, sometimes I am timid, but right now I just feel empty. Grandma, I miss you so much, and I know you are slowly instilling a spirit of quiet and peace in my body.

这篇文章很动人！我也很想念我的奶奶，她是20年前去世的。在第一的句子里，你讨论你的家乡，我不太清楚北京是不是你的家乡，或是另一个城市。

A woman to remember

My hometown is Beijing, China. I need to make myself full of courage because your little girl is faced with new challenges now. I'm looking forward to success but I'm fearful of failure. Sometimes I'm hot-headed, sometimes I'm timid, I feel so empty now. Grandma, I miss you so much, but know you are slowly instilling the spirit of peace and quiet in my body.