공원에서 어제는 현미하고 그녀의 어머니같이 공원에 갔어요. 현미가 다른 아이들이랑 놀은 것 정말 좋아했어요. 스윙으로 놀고있는데, 현미는 떨어졌어요. 그 밤까지 울고있는데,별로 안나빴어요.

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25 ก.ค. 2014 เวลา 15:58

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어제는 현미하고 그녀의 어머니같이(어머니와 같이) 공원에 갔어요. 현미가 다른 아이들이랑 놀은것(놀은것을) 정말 좋아했어요. 스윙으로 놀고있는데(it sounds fine but I would say, 놀던 중), 현미는 떨어졌어요. 그 밤까지 울고있는데,별로 안나빴어요. (If I am not mistaken, you wanted to say "she was cyring but didn't get hurt so much?" If so, "울기는 했지만 별로 많이 다치지는 않았어요)

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