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내 생일! 어제는 내 셍일이에요 저한테 축하해요! ㅋㅋㅋㅋ 케이크를 너누 먹고 싶었어요 하지만 저는 사러 못 나갔어요 근데 오늘 살 것 같아요. 올해 많이 꿈을 있어요, 많이 하고 싶는 것 있어요. 이따 이야기할 것 같아요.
30 ก.ค. 2014 เวลา 2:25
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내 생일!

어제는 내 일이었어요. 저한테 축하해주세요! ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
케이크를 너 먹고 싶었어요. 하지만 저는 사러 못 나갔어요.
근데 오늘 살 것 같아요.
올해 많 있어요, 많이 하고 싶는 것 있어요. 싶은 게 많아요.
이따 나중에 이야기 할 것 같아요. 거예요.


If you want to make a formal sentence it, it's right to use '제' instead of '내' → 제 생일


Happy belated birthday! I hope you are achieveing your all dreams! :)

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