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Working day. Today, I didn't have a car. So I had to get on a bus. But I never went to office by bus.....and I don't know How I go there. I got on wrong bus. I lost the way. T^T when looked on my watch. I had a few time to go there. I decided call motorbike taxi rider. I arrived at office in time!!!!. Yeahhhh So cool. Thank you. Can you help me to edit my sentence,please? Thank you.
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Working day.

Today, I didn't have a car. So I had to get on a bus. But I've never went gone to the office by bus.....and I don't know how I got there. 

I got on the wrong bus. !

I lost the my way. T^T when I looked on my watch. , I had a few time little time left to go get there. I decided to call for a motorbike taxi rider.

I arrived at the office in time!!!!. Yeahhhh So cool. Thank you.

Can you help me to edit my sentence,please? Thank you.

 

For your stated level of English you did wonderful. Try to keep an eye on where you would place the, and I in your sentances. If you ever have any questions you can find me over at http://www.italki.com/teacher/1610322. Have a great day Pie3.14

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