My first time! Hi guys, this is my first time that I write on Italki. I would like to learn English because I would like to work out of Italy. I really like to help to other people with their italian.

Fabrizio

19 ก.ย. 2014 เวลา 14:20

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My first time!

Hi guys, this is my first time writing that I write on Italki. I would like to learn English because I would like want [1] to work outside of Italy. I really like to help to other people with their italian.

[1] "Would like" works here but I replaced it with "want" since you already used "would like" in the same sentance.

19 กันยายน 2014

My first time!

Hi guys, this is my first time writing on Italki. I want to learn English because I would like to work outside of Italy. I really enjoy helping other people with their Italian.

Vey good!

21 กันยายน 2014

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