Carolina Melo
A cooking class Laste week I took a cooking class. There are twelve outer students. The teacher is very nice. The corse lasted one week. I learned to prepare meet, pasta, botatos, fish, sauses. I loved the course! It was grat.
10 ต.ค. 2014 เวลา 13:27
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A cooking class

Last week I took a cooking class. There were twelve other students and the teacher was very nice. The corse lasted one week. I learned to prepare meet, pasta, botatos, fish and some sauses. I loved it! It was great.

24 ตุลาคม 2014
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A cooking class

Last week I took a cooking class. There were twelve other students. The teacher was very nice. The course lasted one week. I learned to prepare meet, pasta, potatoes, fish, sauces. I loved the course! It was great.

24 ตุลาคม 2014
1

A cooking class

Laste week I took a cooking class. There are twelve outer students. The teacher is very nice. The corse lasted one week. I learned to prepare meet, pasta, botatos, fish, sauses. I loved the course! It was grat.

 

Corrected version:

 

Last week, I took a cooking class. There were twelve outer students. The teacher there was very nice. The course lasted one week. I learned about how to prepare meat, pasta, potatoes, sauces. I loved the course. It was great.

 

My remarks:

Definitely needs improving but a good try anyway. Keep at it Carolina. You will improve, that is for certain.

10 ตุลาคม 2014
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A cooking class

Last week I took a cooking class. There were twelve outer students. The teacher was very nice. The course lasted one week. I learnt  preparing  meet, pasta, potatoes, fish, sauses. I loved the course! It was great.

well done ......

10 ตุลาคม 2014
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