Peter
It Is Better Don't See Things from the Rear Sometimes Window in my home study must be replaced today. Workers warned me that this work is very dusty and I have to carry out delicate things from the room. Due to this warning I have to move my computer to the sitting room and place it on the dining table. When I saw what it looks like I had been stunned and thought that things often looks better from front side than from rear.
22 ต.ค. 2014 เวลา 8:20
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It Is Better Not to See Things from the Back Sometimes

The window in my home study had to be replaced today. The workers warned me that the/this work would be very dusty, and I'd have to remove delicate things from the room. As the result of this warning, I had to move my computer to the sitting room and place it on the dining table. When I saw what it looked likeI was stunned, and thought that things often looks better from the front side than from the back.

 

I underwent an electrocardiogram two weeks ago, and with all the wires and electrodes attached, I looked exactly like the back of your computer!

 

 

23 ตุลาคม 2014
it seems you never use your "num lock" :p
22 ตุลาคม 2014
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