Barbara
Longing I am going to turn off the light to embrace my thoughts and let my imagination flies. There where I can do anything, where nothing is impossible. I do not mind to live of illusions if they make my happy. Where will I go this time?, Who will come with me? I'll go this time to achieve my great hankerings. You could come with me if you want, but first you need to turn off the lights.
31 ต.ค. 2014 เวลา 17:43
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Longing

I am going to turn off the light(s) to embrace my thoughts and let my imagination fly.
There where I can do anything, where nothing is impossible.
I do not mind living for illusions if they make my happy.
Where will I go this time?, Who will come with me?
I'll go this time to achieve my great hankerings.
You could come with me if you want, but first you need to turn off the lights.

 

Barbara, tus anotociones son mis favoritas corregir. ¡Son fantásticas! 

-Jeff

2 พฤศจิกายน 2014
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A Longing

I am going to turn off the light to embrace my thoughts and let my imagination flies.
There where I can do anything, where nothing is impossible.
I do not mind to live of illusions if they make my happy.
Where will I go this time?, Who will come with me?
I'll go this time to achieve my great aspirations .
You can come with me if you want, but first you need to turn off the lights.

31 ตุลาคม 2014
1

Longing

I am going to turn off the light to embrace my thoughts and let my imagination flies fly.
There where I can do anything, where nothing is impossible.
I do not mind to live of by illusions if they make my happy.
Where will I go this time?, Who will come with me?
I'll go this time to achieve my great(est) hankerings.
You could come with me if you want, but first you need to turn off the lights.

 

Bravo! muy bien. Puedo sólo esperar entender exactamente lo que quiere decir. Es su propio o traducción de otro?

31 ตุลาคม 2014
1

Longing

I am going to turn off the lights, embrace my thoughts and let my imagination fly.
There where I can do anything, where nothing is impossible.
I do not mind living in illusions if they make my happy.
Where will I go this time?, Who will come with me?
I'll go this time to achieve my great hankerings.
You could come with me if you want, but first you need to turn off the lights.

 

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Hola, Bárbara! Your words are beautiful, as always. On that: "hankering" isn't really a beautiful word. It's like sometihing guys do. "He had a hankering to go to the bar." "He was hankering to return to Canada." You might want to explore "desire," or "wish," or "yearning." :-)

3 พฤศจิกายน 2014
Thanks Mumatz. You write beautiful things too, I been reading something.
31 ตุลาคม 2014
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