Great, Melany! Here are updates and comments:
HELP ME - is it okay? (Switch the order of the subject and the verb "to be" when you ask a question. "Are you a lawyer?" "Is it sunny today?" Use "OK" or "okay".)
I'm Melany and I'm 26 years old. I live in a small city of Sicily with my family and my pets animals. ("Of Sicily" isn't incorrect, but I would use "in Sicily". "My animals" would often refer to farm animals, e.g., if you had a cow, a pig, some chickens, etc. It's common to say "my pets" - a dog, a cat, a hamster, etc.)
I have a sunny personality. I really like cooking and walking. (Perfect!)
I enjoy travelling and getting to know a new cultures. (Or "learning about new cultures")
I would like to be an au pair to for learning a new language. (Note "I would like to be..." in terms of a profession.)
Dear family,
I'm Melany, 26, Italian girl, living in a town in Sicily with my family and pets ( animals if you live on a farm). I have a sunny personality and really like cooking and walking.
I enjoy travelling and getting to experience new cultures.
I would like to be an au pair , and improve my English/Spanish along the way
HELP ME is it OK?
Dear family,
I'm Melany and I'm a 26 years old. I live in a small city of Sicily with my family and my pets. I have a sunny personality and I really like cooking and walking.
