Cold Day Today is a cold day, I go to school early And I like the weather because I'm wearing sweater so i don't feeling about this cold day, I will make some tea with milk now, I'm sitting in the yar

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Cold Day Today is a cold day, I go to school early And I like the weather because I'm wearing sweater so i don't feeling about this cold day, I will make some tea with milk now, I'm sitting in the yard alone and look at my students.

27 พ.ย. 2014 เวลา 4:37

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Cold Day

Today is a cold day.

Pefect.

I go to school early And I like the weather because I'm wearing sweater so i don't feeling about this cold day, I will make some tea with milk now, I'm sitting in the yard alone and look at my students.

(Try to write in shorter sentences.)

I go to school early. I like the weather because I can wear a sweater.

... so i don't feeling about this cold day . . .

???

I will make some tea with milk now. <--------- perfect

I'm sitting in the yard, alone, and I look at my students.

also: I'm sitting alone in the yard, and I look at my students.

27 พฤศจิกายน 2014

you need to organize your thoughts while writing , you're moving so quickly from a point to another ! , this will make it hard to grow up with your grammar specially with tenses ! ..Good Luck!

27 พฤศจิกายน 2014

A Cold Day

Today is a cold day, I went to school early and I like the weather because I'm wearing a sweater so i don't feel about this cold day.NowI am making some tea with milk, I'm sitting in the yard alone and looking at my students.

27 พฤศจิกายน 2014

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