Volleyball
Yesterday, I had a physical education test: I had to make try and get the ball in to the net.
I had to wait so long and practice super hard to do it. I was so scared of being hurt (my arms are still hurting now) so I couldn’t beat the ball with all my strength. I counted 1,2,3; listed the wine brand I love… but nothing worked. My friend bribed (im guessing this is what you mean here :D ) me with some (some sounds nicer to me) free tiramisu, it didn’t work. Then I whisper “Time to…” from Time to say goodbye. And magically, I got the ball in the net. WOW!!!
When my name was called to do the test, I went to my position and strangely I felt so calm and threw all the balls (balls if you mean more than one) successfully. I love that feeling so much. I passed the exam. My friends cheered me and one of them (sounds nicer) said to me “You’re so cool”. I was so happy. >w<
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Sounds fun *cheers you on*