Self-introduction
My friends call me Lu,, [1] and [2] I am a designer. I have participated in the IELTS test, but I failed, which is very disappointed disappointing. I still would like to study English, because of my career. I hope I have an opportunity to travel to Europe, because their product design is really great. The Italki is a very good website, which makes people meet a lot of teachers. I am not good at English speaking [3], so I hope I could can make friends that want to study Chinese and could talk with me. I like watching American movies and traveling. When I feel sad , I aways watch 'Friends'.
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[1] If you can, use a western comma and a space (, ) rather than a Chinese comma.
[2] Each of these phrases could be separate sentences:
"My friends call me Lu. I am a designer."
Whenever you join two separate sentences, you must use a comma and a "conjunction" (such as 'and', 'or', 'with', or 'but'):
"My friends call me Lu, and I am a designer."
[3] It would be more natural to write: "I am not good at speaking English."
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Your English is not bad at all. Your meaning was always very clear. 加油!
Self-introduction
My friends call me Lu,I am a designer. I have participated in the IELTS test,but I failed,which is very disappointed dissapointing . I still would like to study English,because of my career. I hope I have opportunity to travel to Europe,because their product design is really great. The italki is a very good website,which makes people meet a lot of teachers. I am not good at English speaking,so I hope I could make friends that want to study Chinese could talk with me. I like watching American movies and traveling.When I feel sad ,I aways watch 'friends'.