Tonia
Do you enjoy shopping for new clothes? would you like correct this for me? Thanks Do you enjoy shopping for new clothes? I like shopping for clothing. It's a lot of fun finding new shirts or new jeans to put on, trying out new clothes that I normally wouldn't wear. I especially love shopping for shoes and bags (I suppose the accesories are impotant to have a nice look) I could shop and shop and never get tired of them or I can go from store to store untill I find the best shoes and of course they have to be skinned and have a good sole shoes, just to walk comfortable!. The only thing I dislike about them are the prices but at the moment I can efford it ,in the future I don't know it.
22 ม.ค. 2015 เวลา 11:29
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Do you enjoy shopping for new clothes? would you like to correct this for me? Thanks

Do you enjoy shopping for new clothes?

I like shopping for clothing. It's a lot of fun finding new shirts or new jeans to put on, trying out new clothes that I normally wouldn't wear. I especially love shopping for shoes and bags (I suppose the accessories are important to have a nice look) I could shop and shop and never get tired of them or I can go from store to store untill I find the best shoes and of course they have to be skinned leather(?) and have a good sole shoes, just to walk comfortably!.
The only thing I dislike about them are the prices but at the moment I can afford it ,in the future I don't know it.

 

Very good. Only a few spelling mistakes. I wasn't sure what you meant by "skinned" though. I guessed you meant "made from skin" (leather).

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