Omelet I got new lunch box, so I cooked rolled omelet. I added much sugar by mistake. Omelet became too sweet. Oops! (T_T)

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Takafumi

18 มี.ค. 2015 เวลา 15:40

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Omelet

I got a new lunch box, so I cooked rolled omelet.
I added too much sugar by mistake. The omelet became too sweet.
Oops! (T_T)

18 มีนาคม 2015

I got a new lunch box, so I cooked a rolled omelet.

By mistake, I added too much sugar and the omelet became too sweet.

NOTES:

1. "cooked" is acceptable, "made" (to make) can be used too.

2. some a were missing

3. This can be used at the beginning or ending, you can also use 'because I added too [...]', see ***

4. Combine the sentences. (Think like in Japanese: [...] から、[...]。)

5. 'became' is acceptable, using 'was' is better.

*** Alternative sentence: Because I added too much sugar, the omelet became too sweet.

29 มีนาคม 2015

Thanks for your advice!

22 มีนาคม 2015

sorry -- i was meant to say "one item around you"*. Just copy and pasted..

21 มีนาคม 2015

In most cases, you have to add an article before a countable noun. Remember to do that and you will get used to it. Think about is this specifying something or is this generalizing something. If it is specifying, for example, you have mentioned the item before, or it is the only ones around, you have to use"the": the sun, the Japanese I've seen Otherwise, you will use "a"- for one item, "these"- for several items around you, "those"- for several items far away from you, "this"- for one items around you, "that"- for one items far away from you. But don't get confused. Mostly you will end up using "the" or "a". It is useful and important to remember the article usage

21 มีนาคม 2015

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