Davide
The match I play hockey and tomorrow I will play a match. When I play a match, I usually eat pasta but, tomorrow, I will eat a pizza because I will go to my grandparent. I will go to play an another city, and I will probably lose because other team is very very strong and they are older than me. I hope that I will make some goals and that is a very funny match.
28 มี.ค. 2015 เวลา 14:46
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The match Match

 

I play hockey, and tomorrow I will play in a match.
When I play in a match, I usually eat pasta but, tomorrow, I will eat a pizza because I will go to my grandparent’s.
I will go to play an in another city, and I will probably lose because the other team is very, very strong and they are older than me.
I hope that I will make some goals, and that is a very funny it will be a very fun match.

 

Not too bad Davide, just a few minor mistakes, please let me know if you have any questions, and I’d be happy to help you!

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