Sharonbee
Memories(1) When I was a teenager, I used to be fascinated with TV series, such as " Pride and Prejudice ", " Jane Eyre ", " Sherlock Holmes " , " Little Women " and " Anne of Green Gables " and so forth. At that time, there was a vintage televison in my parents' bedroom. It was too old to connect the video signal well. I either turned on and off or had a pat on the TV in order to continue to watch my favorite series. Although suffering the pressure from heavy school work, I still found out some time to follow them. It was a rusty memory.
29 มี.ค. 2015 เวลา 14:32
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Memories(1)

When I was a teenager, I used to be fascinated with1* TV series, such as " Pride and Prejudice ", " Jane Eyre ", " Sherlock Holmes " , " Little Women " and " Anne of Green Gables " and so forth.

At that time, there was a vintage televison in my parents' bedroom. It was too old to connect receive2* the video signal well. I either turned it on and off or had a to pat 3* on the TV in order to continue to watch my favorite series. Although suffering4* the pressure from heavy school work, I still found out some time to follow them. It was is a rusty memory.

 

1* I would prefer - by

2* I presume you mean 'broadcast TV' not connected by a cable to a video player.

3* or - give it a pat

4* more usual to say - suffering under the pressure of ...

30 กรกฎาคม 2015

Memories(1)

When I was a teenager, I used to be fascinated with movies, such as " Pride and Prejudice ", " Jane Eyre ", " Sherlock Holmes " , " Little Women " and " Anne of Green Gables " and so forth.

At that time, there was a vintage televison in my parents' bedroom. It was too old to connect the video signal well. I either turned on and off or had a pat on the TV in order to continue to watch my favorite series. Although suffering the pressure from heavy school work, I still found some time to follow them. It was a rusty memory.

2 ตุลาคม 2015
Pride and prejudice is a movie, thus you say movie. Tv series are shows composed in episodes.
2 ตุลาคม 2015

Memories(1)

When I was a teenager, I used to be fascinated with TV series, such as " Pride and Prejudice ", " Jane Eyre ", " Sherlock Holmes " , " Little Women " , " Anne of Green Gables " ,and so forth.

At that time, there was a vintage television in my parents' bedroom. It was too old to connect the video signal well. I either turned on and off or had a pat on the TV in order to continue to watch my favorite series. Although suffering the pressure from heavy school work, I still found out some time to follow them. It was a rusty memory.

30 มีนาคม 2015
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