Gisele Monteiro
本次博覽會的產品。 在展會上購買和銷售進口產品有很多中國銷售自己的產品。 當我去那裡,我只是看他們適合我們的習俗的方式。他們不會說葡萄牙語很好。 產品在今天的非常大的進口。 To better understand the text I write in English here. In the city where I live don't have many foreigners. But at the fair of imported products has many Chinese. When I go there I'm just watching the way they sell their products. The import of products in today's very large. They do not speak Portuguese very well. I do not know how they managed to get here in my city. But when I go there is where I have more contact with foreigners. :)
6 เม.ย. 2015 เวลา 13:06
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在我居住的城市裡外國人並不多

In the city where I live don't have many foreigners.

但在進口商品的博覽會上卻有很多中國人
But at the fair of imported products has many Chinese.


我只是去那邊看他們如何推銷他們的商品
When I go there I'm just watching the way they sell their products. 

 

他們的葡萄牙語說得不是很好
They do not speak Portuguese very well.

 

The import of products in today's very large.←?

I do not know how they managed to get here in my city. ←?

 

不過那邊是我最能夠跟外國人接觸的地方

But when I go there is where I have more contact with foreigners.←??

 

Sorry,

I tried but I'm still not sure what are you trying to say.^_^

 

6 เมษายน 2015
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在展會上購買和銷售進口產品有很多中國銷售自己的產品。
當我去那裡,我只是看他們適合我們的習俗的方式。他們不會說葡萄牙語很好。
產品在今天的非常大的進口。

在進口產品買賣展覽會上,有很多中國人在銷售自家的產品。
當我在那裡,我只是看他們照著我們的習俗方式販賣產品,但他們葡萄牙語說得並不好。今天的進口產品真的非常大量,我不清楚他們是如何設法運到我的城市。
在那邊能讓我和外國人有更多的接觸。

To better understand the text I write in English here.

In the city where I live don't have many foreigners.
But at the fair of imported products has many Chinese.
When I go there I'm just watching the way they sell their products.
The import of products in today's very large.
They do not speak Portuguese very well.
I do not know how they managed to get here in my city.
But when I go there is where I have more contact with foreigners. :)

(Hello, Gisele my correction conjecture is founded on your Chinese and English statement. If I misinterpret what you want to express to us, please correct me. Thank you!
妳好,Gisele ,我根據妳的中英文敘述去推測並訂正了妳的小作文,如果有任何地方曲解妳原本想表達的意思,請您幫我做修正,謝謝!)

7 เมษายน 2015
1

本次博覽會的產品。

在展會上購買和銷售進口產品有很多中國銷售自己的產品。
當我去那裡,我只是看他們適合我們的習俗的方式。他們不會說葡萄牙語很好。
產品在今天的非常大的進口。

To better understand the text I write in English here.

In the city where I live don't have many foreigners.

我所居住的城市並沒有太多的外國人
But at the fair of imported products has many Chinese.
但博覽會上卻有很多中國人
When I go there I'm just watching the way they sell their products.

當我去到那裡時,我就只是看他們賣東西的方式
The import of products in today's very large.
今天進口的貨物量非常大
They do not speak Portuguese very well.

他們的葡萄牙語說的不是太好
I do not know how they managed to get here in my city.
我不知道他們是如何到我們城市的
But when I go there is where I have more contact with foreigners. :)
但當我到那裡,我和外國人有更多的接觸。 

Gisele,I try my best to revise your essay based on your English and Chinese version. If you have any problem about the revise, please feel free to contact me. 

7 เมษายน 2015
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