Sophie
청소하기 오늘은 집을 청소했어요. 부엌 더러워서 설거지했어요. 저는 세탁도 했어요. 내일 아마 창문을 청소하고 마루를 쓸거예요. 청소하기 싫어하는데 필요한 일이에요. 7시인데 벌써 피곤해졌어요. 곧 자고 싶어요.
24 เม.ย. 2015 เวลา 0:01
การแก้ไข · 8

Deletion

correction

opinion

 

청소하기

오늘은 집을 청소했어요. 부엌 더러워서 설거지 했어요. 저는  그리고 세탁도 했어요.(or 그리고 빨래도 했어요.) 내일 아마 창문을 청소하고 마루를 쓸_거예요. 청소하기 싫어하는데 필요한 일이에요. 7시인데 벌써 피곤해졌어요. 잠을 자고 싶어요.

24 เมษายน 2015

WrongCorrect
Opinion

청소하기

오늘은 집을 청소했어요. 부엌 더러워서 설거지했어요. 저는 세탁도 했어요. 내일 아마 창문을 청소하고 마루를 쓸_거예요. 청소하기 싫어하는데 필요한 일이에요. 7시인데 벌써 피곤해졌어요. 곧 자고 싶어요.


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24 เมษายน 2015
^^ 감사합니다!
27 เมษายน 2015
강아지가 너무 귀여워요............ ㅠㅠㅋㅋ
26 เมษายน 2015
부엌 means kitchen
24 เมษายน 2015
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