Doris
JJY,you are the best gift I have ever received! To be honest,I don't know how to start this small article.I haven't met JJY for almost a year and I miss her very much. The first time I met JJY was last summer,and it is the time I come to realize how similar we are.It was in July,we participated in one summer camp by coincidence.We stayed together for only 5 days in total. Much to my surprise, that 5 days become my most precious memories in 2014.
6 พ.ค. 2015 เวลา 13:34
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JJY,you are the best gift I have ever received!

To be honest,I don't know how to start this small article.I haven't met JJY for almost a year and I miss her very much. The first time I met her (JJY) was last summer,and it was (is) the time I came (come) to realise/realize how similar we are. It was in July (,) when by chance we participated in a (one) summer camp. (by coincidence).We stayed together for just (only) 5 days in total. Much to my surprise, those (that) 5 days have become my most abiding / precious memory of (memories in) 2014.

 

Very well thought-out and written article with good sentiment.

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