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First Time Here Hi all,I'm chinese and from ShangHai.I have got a selfstudy 1year long.But the progress of learning slowly. I hope to meet more friends here and make progress together:)
5 ก.ค. 2015 เวลา 3:39
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First Time Here

Hi everyone. I'm Chinese and from ShangHai. I have a self-study that is one year long. My learning progress is going slowly.
I hope to meet more friends on here and make progress together:)

 

Hello, nice to meet you! I hope iTalki can help you learn English quickly and that my corrections are helpful. :)

5 กรกฎาคม 2015

First Time Here

Hi all, [1,2] I'm Chinese and from Shanghai [3].  I have got a selfstudy 1year long been teaching myself for one year [4, 5].  But the my progress of learning slowly has been slow
I hope to meet more friends [6] here and make progress together:)

 

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[1] Saying "Hi all" is fine and has the same meaning as "Hi everyone".  Yet "Hi everyone" is more natural.

 

[2] Always use a space (' ') after every comma (',') and full stop ('.').

 

[3] 上海 is written in English as Shanghai (the second syllable uses a lower-case letter 'h').  Similarly, 北京 is written in English as Beijing.

 

[4] If you are currently teaching yourself, the phrase is "teaching myself" (i.e., present tense).  If you have <em>finished</em> teaching yourself, the phrase is "self-taught" (i.e., past tense).  As examples:

-- "This year I am teaching myself how to paint." (You are still learing how to paint.)

-- "I am a self-taught painter."  (You now know how to paint.)

 

[5] This sentence is a little confusing, because you have not said what you are learning.  The following sentence would be better.

-- "I have been teaching myself English for one year."

 

[6] Hannah suggested inserting the preposition 'on'.  While that is fine, it's not necessary.  Your sentence was also correct.

 

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If you have been teaching yourself English for only one year, you are doing very well.  Your progress has not been slow.  加油!

5 กรกฎาคม 2015

First Time Here

Hi all,I'm chinese and from ShangHai.I have got a selfstudy 1year long.But the process of learning slowly.
I hope to meet more friends here and make progress together:)

5 กรกฎาคม 2015
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