Rogerio Bueno
Weekend Hi, in my country the last weekend was a long weekend because in the Monday was a holiday. We comemorate the Chidren's Day on October 12. In my city. There are many celebration for childrens to funny , in the parks, in the clubs. Everyone could participate in the celebration the childrens eaten sweets and played very.
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Hi. In my country the last weekend was a long weekend because in the Monday was a holiday. We comemorate the Chidren's Day on October 12. In my city there are many celebrations for children to have fun, in the parks and in the clubs. Everyone could participate in the celebration. The children ate sweets and played a lot.

 

<em>[Good work.  'Children' is the irregular plural of 'child' and so doesn not need an 's'.]</em>

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