My favorite festival in my country

My favorite festival in my country of India is a Navratri. in my country India. It is celebrated comes around in October month every year. I like this the navratri because it is more fun. In this festival, people play perform our traditional dance called "Garba" with traditional dress and garaba songs together in community. It is celebrated every night and continues for nine days. People also do worship of our female god and decorate community halls or areas with colorful lighting. That's why the navratri is my favorite festival ever.

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Nice job Sonal.