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It is said that most girls lack the sense of secuirty, which may lead to various unbearable behaviours, like trace her boyfriends' call records or require a curfew. It is also said that girls who lack the sense of security should enhance their inner self, they should be more independent. But I think a good relationship should be able to cure each other rather than encourage self-cure. Nobody is perfect, a good relationship means one plus one is more than just two.
27 ก.ค. 2022 เวลา 3:49
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It is said that most girls lack a sense of security, which may lead to various unbearable behaviors, such as tracing her boyfriend's call records or requiring a curfew. It is also said that girls who lack this sense of security should enhance their inner self and be more independent. But I think partners in a good relationship should be able to support each other rather than encouraging self-help. Nobody is perfect; a good relationship means one plus one is more than just two.
Great job!
27 กรกฎาคม 2022
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It is said that most girls lack a sense of security, which may lead to various unbearable behaviours, like tracing her boyfriends' call records or requiring a curfew. It is also said that girls who feel insecure should enhance their inner self; they should be more independent. But I think in a good relationship, couples should be able to take care of each other rather than encourage self-care. Nobody is perfect - a good relationship means one plus one is more than just two.
Great job! I especially love your last sentence :) I changed the second "lack a sense of security" to "feel insecure" just to help you diversify your vocabulary. Hope it helps :D
27 กรกฎาคม 2022
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