Need some help Hello friends! I would like to excuse for my inappropriate question, but I have started losing heart. Recently I wrote three entries here and only one of them was corrected. Friends,

Oleg Stepo

Need some help Hello friends! I would like to excuse for my inappropriate question, but I have started losing heart. Recently I wrote three entries here and only one of them was corrected. Friends, could you be so kind to review, at least, my last text that I submitted yesterday? It is here http://www.italki.com/entry/465071 Thanks in advance.

22 ส.ค. 2014 เวลา 10:44

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Hi I am sorry for how you feel, I think if you made them shorter that would help people who correct it a lot. If it was about half of the text it would be easier :) All the best and do not lose heart, just adapt the text Gillian

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