Can you correct my writing? 3/4 I'm planing to go out alone. It is one of challenge to close my goal. So I am looking for a good house. I just quit my job, that makes me change to think I have sol

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Can you correct my writing? 3/4 I'm planing to go out alone. It is one of challenge to close my goal. So I am looking for a good house. I just quit my job, that makes me change to think I have solved my curious thing that about my job. I am gonna be a waxer. So I have to finish good house first!

4 มี.ค. 2021 เวลา 4:01

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Can you correct my writing? I'm planing to go out alone. It is one of my challenges to achieve my goal. So I am looking for a good house. I just quit my job, that makes me rethink I have solved my problems about my job. I am going to be a waxer. So I have to finish finding a good house first!

4 มีนาคม 2021

Can you correct my writing? 3/4 I'm planing to go out alone. It is the last challenge for closing my goal. So I am looking for a good house. I just quit my job, that makes me change to think I have solved my curious thing that about my job. I am going to be a waxer. So I have to finish good house first!

I didn't get the idea of the job part.

4 มีนาคม 2021

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