they booth sound a little off to me.
"I am the bait that captors love" but even this doesn't seem quite right.
do you mean raptors.
captors that which/who captures and holds its prey.
raptor a bird of prey.
Unless captors has a meaning I am unaware of?
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1st sentence sounds more natural
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BAIT is singular, therefore: LOVES.
So 1. is grammatically correct. It's still kind of an odd sentence though.