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I went to an omatsuri (Japanese festival) with my parents. There were a lot of people, so it was difficult to walk along the street. Many food stalls were lined up, and the atmosphere was very lively and exciting. We bought two packs of takoyaki, which is a popular Japanese street food. After we came back home, we ate the takoyaki together. They were very delicious, and the pieces of octopus inside were surprisingly big. I really like omatsuri because they are fun and full of energy, but it was a little too hot that day, and I didn’t like that part very much. Have you ever been to a Japanese festival?
15 Thg 07 2026 12:23
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I went to an omatsuri (Japanese festival) with my parents. There were a lot of people, so it was difficult to walk through the streets. There were many food stalls, and the atmosphere was very lively and exciting. We bought two portions of takoyaki, which is a popular Japanese street food. After we got home, we ate the takoyaki together. It was delicious, and the pieces of octopus inside were surprisingly big. I really like omatsuri because they are fun and full of energy. However, it was a little too hot that day, and I didn’t enjoy that part very much. Have you ever been to a Japanese festival?
Level: C1.
Your writing is engaging, well organised, and easy to follow. You describe your experience clearly and include interesting details that make the text enjoyable to read. To make your English sound even more natural, continue refining your collocations and choosing idiomatic expressions commonly used by native speakers. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
15 Thg 07 2026 13:10
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