italki - Untitled - XXV One thing that cats do I find hilarious about is when they start to "knead" other cat

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Untitled - XXV One thing that cats do I find hilarious about is when they start to "knead" other cat that its living at the same place as them. But, when there is any other cat around them, they do it to a duvet, or to something soft and bulky a person left on a bed, for example.

7 Thg 06 2024 05:14

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Untitled - XXV One thing that cats do that I find hilarious is when they start to "knead" another cat that is living in the same place. However, when there isn't any other cat around them, they do it to a duvet, or to something soft and bulky like a person lying on a bed, for example.

This is written reasonably well, but it is important to remember to avoid extra words (for example the word "about" in the first sentence). Also, the word "but" is a conjunction and is normally used to join sentence parts together. It is not normally used to start a sentence. I hope this helps.

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