I finished summer vacation and started school last Friday. After that, A five day holiday was coming soon. I don’t feel like going to school. I want to get used to waking up early and attending class as soon as possible. I have five English classes, so I worry about that.
I will do homework like writing 100words once a week. I felt that 100words was more than I expected. I can’t write very much because I don’t have writing skill and English words vocabulary. And, I don’t have any topics I want to write about. Before I was hard posting every day but writing 100words once a week is also hard.
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I finished summer vacation and started school last Friday. After that, a five
day holiday is coming soon. I don’t feel like going to school. I want to get
used to waking up early and attending class as soon as possible. I have five
English classes, so I worry about that. I will do homework, such as writing 100words
once a week. I feel that 100 words is more than I expected. I can’t write very
much because I don’t have writing skills and a large English words vocabulary. And, I
don’t have any topics I want to write about. Before I was posting hard/lots every day
but writing 100 words once a week is also hard.
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After finishing summer vacation, school started last Friday, followed quickly by a five-day holiday. Naturally, getting back into the habit of waking up early and attending classes has been tough. I'm worried about my five English classes on the schedule!
Weekly 100-word writing assignments also feel heavier than expected. Limited vocabulary and writing experience make it difficult to fill the page, not to mention struggling to find interesting topics. Posting every day was difficult in the past, but managing this weekly word count is proving to be a challenge as well.
You're passage is perfectly understandable. I would rate it at around the B1 level. Although it is understandable, your repetition of "I" sounds a little unnatural and something a total beginner might say or write. My amendments have removed some of the "I"s! Grammatically speaking, we of course need the subject to precede a verb but think about the format in which you are writing - diary! It is obvious that you are writing your thoughts, which is why we don't need as many "I"s. In a similar way, note the rephrasing of "100 words" to "word count" to avoid repeating the same words. Hope that helps! Jonathan
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I finished summer vacation and started school last Friday. After that, A five day holiday was coming soon. I don’t feel like going to school. I want to get used to waking up early and attending class as soon as possible. I have five English classes, so I worry about that.
I will do homework like writing 100words once a week. I felt that 100words was more than I expected. I can’t write very much because I don’t have writing skill and English words vocabulary. And, I don’t have any topics I want to write about. Before I was hard posting every day but writing 100words once a week is also hard.
I'm proud of you because you're TRYING to write English for yourself without using stuff like Google translation or Chat GPT. I hope you keep enjoying writing English♪
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